March 24, 2026

Hanna Alkaf: "The Hysterical Girls of St. Bernadette's"

Title: The Hysterical Girls Of St. Bernadette's [on Amazon | on Goodreads]
Series: None
Author: Hanna Alkaf [Site | Goodreads]
Genres: Supernatural, Contemporary
Year: 2024
Age: 14+
Stars: 4/5
Pros: Fleshed-out, believable (and diverse) protagonists (Muslim, Malaysian). Strong social commentary. Atmospheric writing. 
Cons: The ending feels rushed and doesn't provide enough closure, especially for some characters.
WARNING! Sexual assault/molestation (not graphic, mentioned), trauma, psychosis, victim dismissal, toxic parent, corporal punishment (mentioned).
Will appeal to: Those who enjoy stories about female empowerment and solidarity - better if in a supernatural context.

Blurb: For over a hundred years, girls have fought to attend St. Bernadette’s, with its reputation for shaping only the best and brightest young women. Unfortunately, there is also the screaming. When a student begins to scream in the middle of class, a chain reaction starts that impacts the entire school. By the end of the day, seventeen girls are affected - along with St. Bernadette’s stellar reputation. Khadijah’s got her own scars to tend to, and watching her friends succumb to hysteria only rips apart wounds she’d rather keep closed. But when her sister falls to the screams, Khad knows she’s the only one who can save her. Rachel has always been far too occupied trying to reconcile her overbearing mother’s expectations with her own secret ambitions to pay attention to school antics. But just as Rachel finds her voice, it turns into screams. Together, the two girls find themselves digging deeper into the school’s dark history, hunting for the truth. Little do they know that a specter lurks in the darkness, watching, waiting, and hungry for its next victim... (Amazon)

Review: Why don't more people talk about this book? It's one of those hidden gems that keep getting overlooked in favour of more hyped novels, and I'm going to do my part to rectify this wrong...

SISTERS IN ARMS

In the vein of Flawless Girls, but with more flesh to its plot and characters, THGOSB is an unapologetically Malaysian, yet in a way universal tale with many facets: an enthralling supernatural mystery woven with a strong contemporary/coming-of-age thread; the story of a haunting, yet not a conventional ghost story; but more than anything, a call to togetherness in the face of women's vilification and dismissal. Despite the publisher's notes, however, it definitely doesn't fall under the dark-academia umbrella, unless you think that a single character being strong-armed by her mother into excellence qualifies - I'm telling you this just so you don't build up expectations that won't be met (I mean...everything's labeled "dark academia" these days, but a "school with secrets" setting isn't enough for a book to earn it). Mainly told in a dual narrative, but with the interpolation of a third point of view, THGOSB explores themes of trauma, agency (or lack thereof) and the silencing of female voices, along with sisterhood (real or forged) and the most abhorrent crime: women themselves perpetuating the cycle of abuse because they think it's inescapable, and that the only way girls can protect themselves is by becoming higher-priced commodities. [...]

KEEP IT REAL

Speaking of voices - whether inner monologues or dialogues - all the characters' ones are very distinct and spot-on: Alkaf manages to infuse them with authenticity while never sacrificing rhythm and storytelling (and regardless of the supernatural angle). For instance, I loved how Khadijah's friends were there for her in the aftermath of her trauma (selective mutism included), then while she started investigating the screaming girls phenomenon, but they weren't always perfect and occasionally struggled with her not finding her way back to normal as quickly as they would have liked. Likewise, Rachel's walking a fine line between fighting for an ounce of emancipation and acting as an unwitting conduit while giving in to psychosis felt so real. Both these girls, plus Aishah (Khad's sister) and Fatihah (the first screamer), had my heart. Really, if I have to find a fault in this story, it's that it ends quite abruptly and doesn't offer explanations about a specific point or closure to some of the characters (even to the protagonists, to an extent - I mean, I don't believe in easy resolutions wrapped in a pretty bow, but there's a lot of unfinished business here, though in a way the ending is brilliant). One could say that the villain isn't hard to spot either, but on the other hand, the supernatural mystery's denouement and the showdown are satisfying (and not at all banal). All in all, THGOSB is a thought-provoking study of male entitlement and certain women's complicity in it, a compassionate look at trauma and victim dismissal, and an uplifting celebration of girl solidarity and empowerment in spite of the individual differences, ultimately amplified by the supernatural context. Couple all that with atmospheric writing that never gets purple, and you have a winner that deserves more recognition - so go ahead and read it...

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Like this book? You might also be interested in Anna-Marie McLemore: "Flawless Girls".

20 comments:

  1. Lots of things going on in the trigger warning

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    1. Yep, but it's not a depressing book or anything. It's an empowering one, actually.

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  2. Ooh this sounds really good! Don't you love finding an underrated book that you want to shout about because no one's heard of it? It can be both frustrating and rewarding. I'm so curious about the screaming! Awesome review😁

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    1. Thank you! Yes, I hate that some books are so underrated, but finding one does feel rewarding...

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  3. This one sounds really good. I've had it on my watch list since I saw it available on Kindle Unlimited. I agree too many books get a dark academia label lately in an attempt to boost sales but some are misleading. Great review!!!!

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    1. Thank you! I hope you get to read it, though it's a bit different from your usual horror. Totally worth it though 🙂.

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  4. That is a lot of warnings and then screamers. Sounds like a dark one.

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    1. Not as dark as some others I've read...parts of it are actually heartwarming!

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  5. I've never heard of this one, but it sounds so great! Adding it to my list immediately!

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  6. I have definitely heard of this one, but I never bothered to check it out in any way. I used to have it on the shelf always, but I think we might have sold out at the store, so I'll have to rectify that when I get around to ordering up next!

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    1. I'm glad you ran out of it...by looking at the number of its GR ratings, I wasn't sure it found its audience!

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  7. I love it when an author is good at writing distinct character voices. It's so frustrating, isn't it, to find a gem but not enough people know about it!

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    1. Too bad our blogs are small and not many people see our recs, but even if only one person picks up a book because of us, our mission is accomplished 😊.

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  8. That sounds interesting. The screams? I want to know more about that.

    I've been MIA after my fall but I'm trying to get back a little bit and catch up on what I missed. The whole story will be on my Sunday post, hope to see you there.

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    1. It's a wild story!

      Glad you're feeling up to posting again - of course I'll hop over to your blog to hear all about your fall!

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  9. 'Pros: Fleshed-out, believable (and diverse) protagonists (Muslin, Malaysian).' - Muslim, not Muslin - unfortunate typo there!

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  10. I'm intrigued by how emeshed in the culture and setting the book seems to be.

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