August 07, 2024

Abigail Miles: "The Building That Wasn't" (ARC Review)

Title: The Building That Wasn't [on Amazon | on Goodreads]
Series: None
Author: Abigail Miles [Site | Goodreads]
Genres: Multiverse, Sci-Fi, Thriller/Mystery
Year: 2024
Age: 16+ (the book is geared towards adults, but can be read by mature teens)
Stars: 4/5
Pros: Merges a few sci-fi tropes and puts a clever and creative spin on them. Employs a peculiar writing style.
Cons: The pace is slow at times. There's an impalpable distance between the reader and the characters.
WARNING! Blood, torture (mostly off-screen), violence, domestic violence (off-screen), fires, claustrophobic spaces.
Will appeal to: Those who enjoy a creepy twist on the multiverse theory peppered with a generous dose of mad science, a sizeable amount of family secrets and a dash of romance.

Blurb: When Everly Tertium encounters a strange man in the park claiming to be her grandfather, she is invited to visit a mysterious apartment building. There, she finds herself in a constant state of déjà vu, impossibly certain that she’s already lived through these moments, already been introduced to these people, and already visited all of these rooms and floors. So why does she have no idea what’s happening to her? The longer she stays in the building, the more Everly becomes convinced there is more going on than meets the eye. Something is off, time seems to pass differently, and the people living there seem trapped. Slowly, Everly begins to wonder if she is trapped too. But would she even want to leave, if she could? (Amazon)

Review: First off...DISCLAIMER: I requested this title on Edelweiss. Thanks to CamCat Books for providing a temporary ecopy. This didn't influence my review in any way.

THROWN FOR A LOOP

The Building That Wasn't is one of those books - the ones you can't review at length lest you reveal too much. One of the genre label I used for it is a spoiler in itself, though it doesn't even begin to encompass the...peculiarity...or madness...of the situation as a whole. By way of introduction, suffice to say that, while the plot relies on a few familiar sci-fi tropes and themes, it combines and twists them (along with some new, intriguing ideas) into a complex, claustrophobic, at times brutal, yet ultimately hopeful tale. In a way, The Building That Wasn't reads almost like a modern (and dark) fable, due to both the writing style and the fractured timeline. As a matter of fact, the narrative weaves back and forth in time, with different characters at the forefront (briefly but effectively including the building itself, which is really cool), and though I guess some of the event depicted will make more sense on a second read, Miles managed to create an engaging web of mystery while giving out a piece of the puzzle at a time, if you pay attention. I must admit I was fooled when it comes to the identity of the mysterious Warden, who runs the building, because there could have been at least another contender for that role (I mean, in my opinion...even if a certain detail should have alerted me, but I interpreted it in a different way), and I didn't expect the story to unfold the way it did; but even if I had, it would have been worth my time nevertheless. [...]

A MATTER OF PERSPECTIVE

I have but a few minor qualms about this novel. I think it could have easily been a 5-star read for me had I felt more attached to the characters - especially Everly - though I can't exactly pinpoint the reason why I didn't. What I can say is that, as much as I appreciated the omniscient-narrator perspective the author used from time to time - because it was obviously the right choice - I wished the chapters unfolding in the present and from the protagonists' POV had been more...intimate, if I'm making sense, and the villain(s) more nuanced. Some phrases or situations gave me pause ("If she had chosen the first door at this point in time, many events may have transpired differently thereafter." - how? And what's with the woman in the lobby? which purpose does she serve? does she ever leave the place? why do they bring her food she doesn't eat - or does she? and are characters like her even human anymore?). But that may very well be a matter of personal preference, or I may have missed something. All in all, I did appreciate how different this book felt, how polished - especially considering it's a debut - and how the author strived for literary sci-fi while managing to keep it accessible. If the premise sounds even remotely up your alley and you don't mind stories with a (sometimes) slow pace, pick it up and you'll be rewarded.

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12 comments:

  1. This sounds like a complex, thought-provoking read with a lot of twists and turns. I love when a book keeps you guessing and manages to surprise you. The fractured timeline and the narrative style you described seem really unique. It's a bummer about the lack of character attachment, but it still sounds like the story and the mysterious elements make up for it.

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    1. It was entertaining and quite unique, more than actually complex...of course, bonding with the characters is always a plus, but stories like these are worthy nevertheless!

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  2. I love the sounds of this one - it's going on the wish list!

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  3. I know my enjoyment is closely tied to how much I cared for the characters, but that fact that this still rated high shows how well the story engaged you.

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    1. I think that, with a contemporary book, caring for the characters is extra important, because the story lacks the magical/supernatural/sci-fi angle that can make up for that...

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  4. I'm glad that you liked this despite it being slow-going at times. :D

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    1. I don't mind slow books if done right...

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  5. That does sound unique but I don't like a slow pace.

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    1. It's not always slow...let's say, it has its moments.

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  6. Creepy house stories are my jam, and I think I'd love this, especially with the multiverse element. Awesome review!

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    1. Thanks! Mind you, it's not your average multiverse (in the sense of universe-hopping), but I appreciated its being different.

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